Initial Notes
Notes taken on Winsor Mccays life/career
Very VERY rough notes
First Iteration
Second iteration
Adding in more tidbits of information this time as well as taking away, boxed biro areas are the texts that were removed in my first round of slimming the text down, the red boxed areas were the second round of slimming it down. It took eight minuets to read initially, even when I still had more information/talking points to add.
His work and my thoughts
First notes planning commentry on his work, influences, those he influenced and my own thoughts on him.
Second Personal Thoughts Iteration
At this point I was happy to combine all elements and talking points so far, and fully write up a script.
